The Girl Who Falls Down Stairs - fic by Nanoochka - Post a comment

OK, this is hot and painful and gorgeous. I have a secret affinity for spanking when it's meant to evoke that childhood punishment, not the uber-kinky paddle spanking but just a hand on an ass, a red blemish, a deep sense of guilt... there's something so heart-deep and painful and powerful about that, no wonder people find it erotic. And I love that you found a way of interpreting Dean's "child" lines that was consensual, and didn't portray Dean as an abuser, which is a criticism I've seen often of him. And the fact that you went to forgiveness as a result of the punishment -- that I think is so damned important in finding resolution in those scenarios... it just did everything right with a very sensitive and painful subject and that makes me uber happy to read it.

And the sex, nnghghgh, the way it worked itself in not just hot but also driving the story and character development forward...

yes, just... so much yes.

I am SO glad you linked me to this. It was absolutely stunning.